People Watch
Location: MacDonalds at King Albert Park
1. A man who looks to be in his early 30s or late 20s.
He has dyed his hair with a reddish tint and he wears black spectacles.
He was wearing a blue striped buttoned-down shirt with black pants and shoes.
He had a laptop bag beside him with his laptop out in front of him.
He was on the phone the whole time, speaking in Chinese.
He might be involved in some business related office work and was at macdonalds having breakfast and checking up on any new e-mails he’d received regarding any work matters before he goes to work.
2.A woman who looks to be in her early to mid 40s
Shoulder length black hair.
Dressed in a black long sleeved shirt and pants.
News papers already read on the right side of the table.
Sitting with her son (most probably) and writing some things and having a few laughs.
Seems to be having a relaxing morning spending some time with her son and having breakfast together before sending him to school.
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1. Name given: Anthony Chai Choo Lum
Address: BLK 444 Tampines st 42 #06-132
2. Name: Pearlyn Yap
Address: 7 Kew Heights
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After finishing his breakfast at Macdonalds, Anthony clears the table and proceeds to walk out. While passing by a table, his laptop bag accidentally hits Pearlyn’s fresh cup of coffee spilling its contents on to the table, staining her newspapers. The piping hot coffee drips off the table and scalds Pearlyn’s legs, she screams in pain and flings her soaked newspapers at Anthony.

Your descriptions lack detail and also any thoughts you might have had about their behaviour. More of that would have produced better characters with more potential for stories.